I'm very fortunate, as I've mentioned, to have my lovely wife--with a PhD in English--to edit all my work. Sometimes, she gives the whole thing a pass with hardly any changes; other times, she's a much harsher critic. She just finished the review of A Flirtation with Fey and had some major revisions: entire sections that were too wordy got cut, and one of the villains had to be redone. But I'm incorporating those edits now, and it's a stronger project.

I've had a last couple of posts about rewrites and editing--the next one will be some glimpses of stuff missing from Pathfinder #87 The Choking Tower.